I'm Thalia! I run a book blog called Pictures in the Words and I hope to be an editor for YA fiction. I'm a GoodReads refugee!
So far, it's exactly what I was expecting it to be. Slightly juvenile voice, but still entertaining nonetheless. It's a little interesting to see how horrified everyone is that Valerie is a virgin and plans to stay that way. Maybe it's because I know so many other Mormons, but it's not really that big of a deal where I come from. So it seems a little...unrealistic, I guess. At least from my end.
And there's been some grammatical problems. Ugh, now we have "lets" when it should have been "let's"! Why can't I win?!