I'm Thalia! I run a book blog called Pictures in the Words and I hope to be an editor for YA fiction. I'm a GoodReads refugee!
I'm interested, although the present tense in some of the scenes where Zoe is looking back at things that already happened is disorienting. I generally like journal-style layouts, and this isn't really an exception in that case--it just needs to be a bit more consistent. I'm confused as well, and I'm interested in hearing more about Zoe's past and how she got here. Why her mom might think she has an eating disorder is apparent in her lack of interest in food, her refusal to eat on occasions, etc. But what about Elise? What's going on there? I'm excited to find out!