Thalia @ Pictures in the Words
I'm Thalia! I run a book blog called Pictures in the Words and I hope to be an editor for YA fiction. I'm a GoodReads refugee!
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The Martian
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31/369 pages
The Letters of J.R.R. Tolkien
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193/432 pages
Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix
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43/766 pages
The Children of Húrin
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313/313 pages
26 of 371 (7%)
Well, so far it's not...great. The insta-love between Virgil and KJ is ridiculous. I've already found two basic grammatical errors (yes, they could be typos, and typos I can forgive, but two within the first seven percent of a novel does not bode well). The present tense is getting on my nerves with all the times the word "says" is used. Info-dumping. Unrealistic and nonsensical characters.
I'm lost.
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